my 1st synopsis, 16 WISHES :)

Sabtu, 08 Februari 2014


“16 WISHES”
A Synopsis :
Characters :
ü  Abby                             : Debby Ryan
ü  Jay                                : Jean-Luc Bilodeau
ü  Caleste                        : Anna Mae Roudledge
ü  Crista                           : Krissa Tynes
ü  Sue Jansen                : Kendall Cross
ü  Bob Jansen                : Patrick Gilmore
ü  Mike Jansen               : Cainan Wiebe
ü  Logan Keenan           : Tracey
ü  Joey Lockhart             : Joel Sumande
 “Candles’ magic don’t make mistakes, people do”
She is Abigail Jansen, (Abby). 15 years old. She is attractive and cheerful. But today is Abby’s birthday. She has the same birthday Krista Cook, her neighbor. She really hates Krista, because Krista always beat her. Abby really doesn’t like her. Besides that, she has wish list which is adhered behind her cupboard. There are many 16 wishes. (1) I’ll met Joey Lockhart;  (2) I’ll have the cutest clothes in school;  (3) I’ll  decorate my room the way I want; (4) I’ll like sushi; (5) I’ll have a credit card like mommy’s; (6) I’ll be a good dancer; (7) I’ll get my driver’s license; (8) I’ll have my own car preferably; (9) people will stop treating me like a kid; (10) I’ll be popular; (11) I’ll have my own bathroom; (12) I’ll beat Krista Cook at something, anything, everything; (13) I’ll come home as late as I want; (14) my parents will understand me; (15) I’ll have the best party ever; (16) love Logan Buchanan.  She wishes that it will be come true today. 06:59 A.M she walked to the door, and suddenly “Happy Birthday” Mike (her brother), Bob (dad) and Sue (Mom) was holding a cute cake. They give a small surprised to Abby. Unfortunately she wasn’t too interested for that surprised.
Abby hope that today is special day and really hopefully that her wish list will come true. Luckily, Celeste or she calls with “Birthday Fairy “come at that day. She comes when a group of bee were ignoring Abby’s house. She saved Abby’s wish list. Then she gave back to her. On the street, she met with Jay, her best friend. He gave a gift to Abby. That is a necklace, with the key ring “BFF” stand for (Best Friend Forever). Then, Celeste came with her bus and gave a box as a birthday present to Abby. In fact she got a box of Birthday Candles and lighter. Birthday candles written on “make a wish, light a candle, and watch your sweet sixteen, birthday wishes come true”. At first she said that was a stupid gift, then she took one candle from that box, and lit the candle number one and with number one on my list come true. Magically, a bus approached to them, and Joe Lockhart came down from the bus and kissed her. She is very surprised. And now she believed that the numbers on the candles corresponded with the number on her wish. One by one she lit that candle. First she had met with Joe Lockhart, the wish number 1, and then number 8, 3, 2, 12, 10, 7, 9, and 14.
In the locker, Krista spied her. She saw that Abby brought lighter to school and tried to blow out the candle. When Abby took candle number 2, the candle didn’t work. Soon, Miss Duffy (sport teacher) hold Abby’s hand, she took that, and carried her to the counseling. Fortunately Abby met with Birthday Fairy. Abby told that moment, why that candle didn’t work. And, in fact the candle has the rules; one candle one wish per hour and the magic in the candle expire at midnight tonight. Unfortunately, when Abby lit the candle number 9 she became adult.  Suddenly her parents picked her up to school and carried her to her new apartment. Abby was sad. She didn’t want to be a woman, or even an adult girl.
Now Abby 22 years old.  Abby shouted loudly, she needed talk to Celeste. In fact, the candles have their own logic. They don’t always give you what you want. Sometimes they give you what you need.  The candles and wishes go together. But, Abby needed to take that wish back. But Celeste said that was impossible. Then, Abby paid attention toward to the wish list; she saw that there is a way to back her in to 16. Logan’s photo was adhered on the paper. Magically, Abby changed it became her photo when her father took that photo in 16th. Now 11:59 P.M, soon, she takes the candle number 16 and wish that she goes back to 16. Finally, now Abby become 16, she also make a friend with Krista, throw the wish list, and lives as 16 years old.

HASIL PERBAIKAN :)
TADAAAA....

“16 WISHES”


Movie Report
By

Prima Hidayoza

Characters:

ü  Abby                             : Debby Ryan
ü  Jay                                : Jean-Luc Bilodeau
ü  Caleste                                    : Anna Mae Roudledge
ü  Crista                           : Krissa Tynes
ü  Sue Jansen                : Kendall Cross
ü  Bob Jansen                : Patrick Gilmore
ü  Mike Jansen               : Cainan Wiebe
ü  Logan Keenan           : Tracey
ü  Joey Lockhart             : Joel Sumande




“Candles’ magic don’t make mistakes, people do”
She was Abigail Jansen, (Abby). 15 years old. She was attractive and cheerful. Today, it was Abby’s birthday. She had same birthday with Krista Cook, her neighbor. She really hated Krista, because Krista used to beat her. Abby didn’t like her. Besides that, she had wish list which is adhered behind her cupboard. There are many 16 wishes. “ (1) I’ll met Joey Lockhart;  (2) I’ll have the cutest clothes in school;  (3) I’ll  decorate my room the way I want; (4) I’ll like sushi; (5) I’ll have a credit card like mommy’s; (6) I’ll be a good dancer; (7) I’ll get my driver’s license; (8) I’ll have my own car preferably; (9) people will stop treating me like a kid; (10) I’ll be popular; (11) I’ll have my own bathroom; (12) I’ll beat Krista Cook at something, anything, everything; (13) I’ll come home as late as I want; (14) my parents will understand me; (15) I’ll have the best party ever; (16) Love Logan Buchanan.”  She wished that it could be come true today. 06:59 A.M, she walked to the door, and suddenly “Happy Birthday” Mike (her brother), Bob (dad) and Sue (Mom) was holding a cute cake. They give a small surprised to Abby. Unfortunately she didn’t too appreciate for that surprised.
She wished that today was special day and her wished list could come true. Luckily, Celeste or she called with “Birthday Fairy “came at that day. She came when a group of bee were ignoring Abby’s house. She saved Abby’s wish list. Then, she gave back to her. On the street, she met with Jay, her best friend. He gave a gift to Abby. That was a necklace, with the key ring “BFF” stand for (Best Friend Forever). Then, Celeste came with her bus and gave a box as a birthday present to Abby. In fact, she got a box of Birthday Candles and lighter. Birthday candles written on “make a wish, light a candle, and watch your sweet sixteen, birthday wishes come true.” At first she said that was a stupid gift. Then, she took one candle from that box, and lit the candle number one and with number one on my list come true. Magically, a bus approached to them, and Joe Lockhart came down from the bus and kissed her. She was very surprised. She believed that the numbers on the candles corresponded with the number on her wish list. One by one she lit that candle. First, she had met with Joe Lockhart, the wish number 1, and then number 8, 3, 2, 12, 10, 7, 9, and 14.
In the locker, Krista spied her. She saw that Abby brought lighter to school and tried to blow out the candle. While Abby took candle number 2, the candle didn’t work. Soon, Miss Duffy (sport teacher) hold Abby’s hand, she took it, and carried her to the counseling. Fortunately, Abby met with Birthday Fairy. Abby told that moment, why that candle didn’t work. In fact, the candle has the rules; “one candle one wish per hour and the magic in the candle expire at midnight tonight. “ Unfortunately, when Abby lit the candle number 9 she became adult.  Suddenly her parents picked her up to school and carried her to her new apartment. Abby was sad. She didn’t want to be a woman, or even an adult girl.
Now Abby 22 years old.  Abby shouted loudly, she needed talk to Celeste. In fact, “the candles have their own logic. They don’t always give you what you want. Sometimes they give you what you need.  The candles and wishes go together.” Abby needed to take that wish back. Celeste said that was impossible. Then, Abby paid attention toward to the wish list; she saw that there was a way to back her in to 16. Logan’s photo was adhered on the paper. Magically, Abby changed it became her photo when her father took that photo in 16th. 11:59 P.M, soon, she took the candle number 16 and she wished to go back to 16th. Finally, Abby became 16, she made a friend with Krista, throw the wish list, and lived  as 16 years old.

Language expression     :
(Permission)
·         Excuse you….
(Certainty)
·         I’m going to make sure nobody comes to your party.
·         You sure you’re ready for this?
(Anger)
·         It’s not cool, it’s terrible, I don’t know what I did to deserve this.
(Disagreement)
·          No, no, I’m not a woman …..
·         I didn’t appreciate it
(Greetings)
·         Hi Krista….
Hi, I’m so glad you can make it.
(Pleased)
·         Cool car, it’s perfect. Love it.
·         Cool ride
·         This is a great picture
(Belief)
·         So, do you believe me?
·         So, Mike can really play?

(Regret)
·         If I could turn back the clock and change that day I would.
·         I’m so sorry
·         Any chance you can forgive me?

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contoh sederhana motivation letter

Jumat, 07 Februari 2014

PRIMA HIDAYOZA
Pendididikan Bahasa Inggris, UNP
Jl. Belibis no 15 Air Tawar Padang
Padang, 24 October 2013

Dear AIESEC Committee of UNAND.

Assalamualaikum  Wr. Wr

First of all I would loke to say thank you very much for all of you who has come to UNP, and promoted about AIESEC. I was really interested when I heard that AIESEC come to unp. I’m writing this letter to express my strong motivation for AIESEC. Right now, I’m majoring Pendidikan Bahasa Inggris of UNP, I’m a new college student here. I love organization wherever I am. But, in fact many students do not realize the importance or value behind joining organization. Here I will give some reasons why I want join in AIESEC. Well as the college student I want to learn how to talk other people from different culture and countries, and here AIESEC came as International Organization, this is my opportunity to build some social skill. I want to improve my communication skill, because I’m interacting with different people. Beside that I may take up the responsibility or challenge to be a leader and I can learn what it takes to be leader, and this is the way for me to get training and instilling those good leadership skills.
I see the phenomenon that,  life is not about career and making money. It is about building friendship and having fun. I can get a chance to meet people and build good friendship. I will be part of the social activities and will have so much fun. As the name international organization, AIESEC have developed a certain international organization structure, some are worldwide oriented and that give us a chance to get international connections on different levels.
As my previous experienced ,when I was senior high school, I used to join some organization such us ROHIS, and debate club. I lived in dormitory class, so I have any experienced about organization. I lived with the best community. Furthermore, the dormitory class always held a competition, “ EMC “ stand for “English Month Competition “ as level West Sumatera  every year. I included as the chairwomen of debate competition, we asked for some lecturer and the best speaker from UNAND, Politeknik, and UNP. As the committee I should control the entire event, besides that, I also join an MC in some event or activity which is held in my school, I also good in public speaking. I also joined some competition, for instance speech contest, debate, storytelling, LCC UUD 1945 and so on. So that’s why I would continue my talent here in AIESEC. I want to give contribution, not only for myself but to the member of society trough my skill. I want know more about organization, exchange student is my dreams. By AIESEC I can help me to announce or promote to another countries all about Indonesia.
May be that’s all that I can tell you. By this letter I really hope that I’m serious to join as the member in AIESEC. Thank you for time you invested to read my motivation letter and a little experience, hope to speak with you soon and pass to the next section.
Assalamualikum Wr. Wb



   Yours sincerely

PRIMA HIDAYOZA



artikel about clean and healthy behaviour

Kamis, 06 Februari 2014

Clean and Healthy Behaviour

Behaviour has same meaning with life style that is the way of people action with all their activities which gives influenced  by habits and local culture and also there are many  element of environment around us, such as education, science, and religion. Health is metabolic efficiency. Sickness is metabolic inefficiency. Nobody is totally healthy or totally sick. Each of us is a unique combination of health and sickness. In fact, health is at any moment in time, more important than wealth. We will appreciate health more if financial is the only thing we have left. When we talk about health is wealth. It is part of happiness, and with it, we can live longer, acquire more wealth, and contribute to society.
At the same time, cleanliness is also one of the major factors that lead you to having a healthy life. Wearing clean clothes, living in clean surroundings, getting rid of the clutter and waste around definitely brings in good, positive vibes, leading you to healthy living. Cleanlines of our body and environment can give us nice and good condition, health and our body vitality will be kept well. By keeping body and environment health, we will pushed away from all sickness. Besides that we should also consume healthy food.

Healthy food is food which is clean, nutricious and parmitted by Allah or we often say halal. Halal the things either the way we get it.  Meat pig, alcohol, and drugs  are some food that have to be avoid. By avoid smoking and alcohol consumption as it contributes in nothing good, but simply leads to body abuse. Alcohol and smoking have been confirmed to be the most common disease causing factors. Therefore, one of the best healthy living tips is to let go of these bad habits.
Healthy eating will help in the prevention or maintenance of sugar levels thus lowering the chance of developing diabetes or other illnesses. There are certain benefits and important reasons for eating healthy. Eating healthy allows the body to operate more efficiently, so that the numbers of visits to the doctor’s office related to digestion or the lack there are kept to a minimum, and a better quality of life can be enjoyed.
The  reason eating healthy foods as essential is it provides the body with nutrients needed to maintain energy levels throughout the day. A person will feel better and have higher sustained energy levels that could last until evening or when it is time to retire for the day. Here are some suggestions that should be used to start eating healthy. We recommend to develop a routine meal plan for daily meals and snacks. First, learn to not skip meals especially breakfast, a balanced breakfast is recommended every morning. Providing the body with breakfast in the morning is like starting the motor of a car with a full tank of gas. If there is no gas in the tank, the car will not run. With a full tank of gas, the car is able to run for days. By providing the body with fuel in the morning, the body is started for the day.
And then,  clean and healthy behaviour that should be given serious  is the cleanliness of house’s environment, school , and public place such as bus station, hospital, etc.  Clean environment will give contribution to each peolpe who use and also keep us to avoid from all the sickness. Nowadays, our country need consciusness the member the society to take steps to keep our environment. Unfortunately, still there are many people who do not care with their environment around them. For example, many people throw rubbish every where, so that it cause polution in our environment. The habit to put the trash in its place and keep away from the environment pollution will give us some advantages to keep our environment and our selves. So, I’m sure that our life will be better.
It is exactly right, if we start to care about  behaviour from now on. Whether in work, school, and also in our environment. We should keep our environment clean to avoid pollution, flood, disease, and lack of the clean water. Especially for health behaviors, we can find some cases of the disease incidents unhealthy behaviour  such as lung disease, cancer, venereal disease, heart disease and so forth. To overcome some of the those mentioned above, of course, the behavior of clean and healthy living needs to become a "fortress" for clean and healthy lifestyle. Healthy household is a unit of the smallest communities to achieve an optimal health status. 

There are some ways that we can do at home to keep clean and healthy behaviour, that is :
1.    There is enough ventilation
2.    Don’t consume the expire food
3.    Don’t drink uncooked water
4.    And always take a shower twice a day

Finally, closing my speech I have a massage for you my friends. Clean and healthy behaviour is very important for us. Because it make you happy and enjoy. So lets make friends with our environment. So that our environment will not give problem to us and next generation. If people can defend their  their environment, so it would not give problem for now and future



 
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