DISCUSSION ESSAY
Prima Hidayoza (1305361)
PROS AND CONS OF FEMINIST MOVEMENT IN SOCIETY
Feminist movement can be defined as the belief women and men are treated
differently by our society, and women have frequently and systematically been
unable to participate fully in social and institution. It is also a desire to
change that situation where women and men are same.
Feminism began in the western world in the late 19th century and has gone through three waves. Up to now, feminism still exists in all countries to address the financial, social and cultural inequalities, especially focus on women’s rights. Women need their independences and rights to be same as men. On the other hand, feminist movement seems only a desire of women itself.
Feminism began in the western world in the late 19th century and has gone through three waves. Up to now, feminism still exists in all countries to address the financial, social and cultural inequalities, especially focus on women’s rights. Women need their independences and rights to be same as men. On the other hand, feminist movement seems only a desire of women itself.
If we analyze in positive sides many ideas why women declare their
self to pro with feminist movement. In the first place, we believe that
human right is the biggest factor why feminism appears in the world. The
phenomenon happens around us is that women cannot express their feeling in
society. In Indonesia’s laws, for example, the representative of women in parliament
is that at least 30% (UU No. 8 Parliament Election). It shows us, there are no
balances between women and men. We do not think that men are cleverer that
women, but we believe that we need same rights between women and men. When we
talk about human rights it also relate with law, where we, as member of
society, have law and duty in doing our human right. There are 3 dimensions why
we, especially women, need the same position with men. The first one is that
liberty that related with civil and political. Second is that equality which is
related with social, culture, and economic. Third is that fraternity which is
connected with collective. The law that has been declared sometimes give
distinguish and limitation between women and men. In civil right, we believe
whether women could freely choose of refuse marriage partner, but sometimes in
societies some women are forced to marry soon by her family.
Secondly, the development in this
era gives contribution to feminist movement.
By the time pass by, the technology and knowledge develop fast. It also
change the way of thinking in society. We do believe that we could not live and
adopt the ancestor ideology, because we live in different eras. We need the
evolution and innovation to be a better person in order we can maintain our
position in this era. This modern era gives big contribution toward women
perspective that they need the equality between men and women. Nowadays,
women’s thinking has completely changed. For instance, the career women, as the
tangible evidence, indicate women need movement and innovation. Career women
prove us that women also can do it as men so. It still debate, however. A wife
in a family cannot expect the salary from men, because the needs in this period
are higher. The secularism increases day by day, because of people provide and
serve the new ones. This 21th century shows us that women and men need the same
balances in order to get welfare. Welfare is needed in order we can pretend and
face this era. Women need to mixed-up with it, because it is impossible to give
all portions to men.
Then, gender equality is also one of
the factors of feminist movement. People believe that women are weak. Yes it
is. However, we need to think logically. It is not because women cannot do what
men do so. When we compare to the single parent, being only a mom, they still
keep and alive as same as other people in our environments. It reminds us that
women also can do everything to fulfill their need. In addition, there still
exists gender discrimination. In United Kingdom feminist shows that violence
against women and girls on average two women a week are killed by a violent
partner or ex-partner in the UK, up to 3 million women and girls across the UK
experience rape, domestic violence, stalking, or other violence each year, an
estimated 66,000 women in England and Wales in 2001 had been subject to Female
Genital Mutilation (FGM) and at least 24,000 girls were at risk of FGM in 2007,
and so on. It shows that discrimination for women still exists. (Statistic of
gender inequality UK Feminista). Another fact that we can see in media that
black African people, especially the women, still do discrimination if they
visit or stay in abroad. The minority, black African women, do not respect by
majority. In western, we often hear that women who have white complexion do oppression
to women who have black complexion. They assume that they are not in the same
line.
Feminist movement can influence others women in other countries. It is
still debatable for all people in this world.
Thus, despite the contradictory
current scenario, there is much remarkable and potentially radical, progressive
or emancipatory feminist praxis to be seen if we look hard enough. There is
also, we suggest, a resurgence of women’s and feminist organising, and feminist
theorising, at the heart of a range of social movements today (see, e.g.,
Eschle and Maiguashca, 2010). Much of this is documented in the special section
on feminist strategies, which brings together a wide range of
reflections from around the world in order to contribute to a debate on practice
which in our view needs to be revived and amplified. (Transnational feminisms
at the WSF November 2011, Volume 3:52 page 32)
Feminist movement comes from a group who
has high ambitions in defending women existence. They believe that women have to be same with
men, and it must be maintain in all sides. It is not logic, though. It also
makes some conflicts among women and society. People who cons with it have more
strong reasons why they do not like feminist movement. A part of them say yes and support for
feminist movement, but others do not give his/her enthusiasm for feminist
movement.
In contrast,
many people against feminist movement. The first factor that makes it happen is
that the women’s instinct. We have already known that women should keep their
family at home, keep children, and being a good household for her family. It is
true; women task is only maintain and make sure her family whether they are in
good condition. Women just stay at home to take care of his family, and men
have a job to fulfill their need. It means that a wife receive money from her
husband. Men give the justification to women that they are not expected to find
money in respecting women. Men love women, and they do not want women to get
violence outside, so that women are proper to stay at home in caring her
children.
Furthermore some activities cannot
be done by women. It sounds strange when women ask to lift the heavy weight
such as chair, table, and so on. It warns that women need the protection. We
believe that quality of women existence should improve, because we argue that
women who get discrimination because they cannot show their identity. It means
that when women keep themselves, wherever they are, they would not bother by
bad people/community.
To sum up, feminist movement
describes the cultures, where women are not treated well than men. They assume
that feminism is the best way to turn back their opinion about equality.
Feminism consists of activist, whether personal and group, to make the
evolution and new change in their selves and social based what they expected on
without think the impact. I declare that I say no for feminist movement. We
never find the real justification in this world, because law has been coming as
the media to reach and set our life. The ideas are absolutely zero differences
between men and women. There are differences, but these differences do not make
either gender superior or inferior to the other. This quote might remind us to
think and analyze “Dealing with complexity is an inefficient and unnecessary
waste of time, attention and mental energy. There is never any justification
for things being complex when they could be simple.”(Edward de Bono)
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